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Weep For You
by Cloudo Wed Aug 10, 2011 7:12 pm
So there's a lot going on
Tryin' to stay strong
But this feeling's got a hold on me
Tears fall fast
I tried to make the good times last
Now I'm just trying to break free
I watch everything fall apart again
My sanctuary in ruins
Pushed into the deep end
Nothing can just stay the same
And I weep
Weep for you
Weep for all that I have lost
And all I stand to lose
Because knowing who I am and knowing you
There's nothing I wouldn't do
To fix it all
Before it falls again
Tryin' to stay strong
But this feeling's got a hold on me
Tears fall fast
I tried to make the good times last
Now I'm just trying to break free
I watch everything fall apart again
My sanctuary in ruins
Pushed into the deep end
Nothing can just stay the same
And I weep
Weep for you
Weep for all that I have lost
And all I stand to lose
Because knowing who I am and knowing you
There's nothing I wouldn't do
To fix it all
Before it falls again
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Re: Weep For You
by Guest Wed Aug 10, 2011 7:20 pm
thats ahmazing cloud<3
please write more, wow, that was breath-taking.
Rep points for you:3
please write more, wow, that was breath-taking.
Rep points for you:3
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Re: Weep For You
by maybear209 Wed Aug 10, 2011 10:07 pm
I got to say, that's super well done.
Its like in a way, I 90% relate to that,
It's really good.
Good job, cloud, thanks for sharing.
Its like in a way, I 90% relate to that,
It's really good.
Good job, cloud, thanks for sharing.
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Re: Weep For You
by AbbyIsSoHappy♥ Thu Aug 11, 2011 9:36 am
Wow Cloud that's really good.
I can really relate to that since I'm in the middle of a huge mess right now..
I can really relate to that since I'm in the middle of a huge mess right now..
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Re: Weep For You
by BriannaSmiles Fri Aug 26, 2011 4:00 pm
I Like this A lot keep writing clay!!
I will, lol!
Except this is Cloud O_O
LOL AJ.....
~CLOUDISNOTCLAY~
I will, lol!
Except this is Cloud O_O
LOL AJ.....
~CLOUDISNOTCLAY~
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Re: Weep For You
by maybear209 Sun Aug 28, 2011 11:52 pm
It's a nice poem, zoey. What red...?
-cloud, again, I really liked it & I can relate to it many times.
-cloud, again, I really liked it & I can relate to it many times.
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Re: Weep For You
by Mik Mon Aug 29, 2011 10:20 pm
STAY ON TOPIC. :O This is cloud's very nice poem O__O PLEASE STAY ON TOPIC. 
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